Rallyboy – Somewhere Faraway

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  • Dan Wilson
    Participant

    Hi Rallyboy,

    Really liked the song. The BGV at 2 and 4 minutes where very nice I think they really fit with the dreamy feel you are trying to evoke seems like you could visit it once more within the body of the song. As for the middle section why not explore using the vibrato guitar there, as an example listen to what you were doing at around 3 minutes. If I could given one small constructive criticism – that is to fade the morse code part a little earlier since it is more straight time and the rest of the song has more swing to it, I think it takes away from the groove of the song.

    I hope I haven’t offended with what I wrote above.

    Dan

    Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

    rallyboy101
    Participant

    Thanks for the comments Dan, and glad you liked the song. I’ll never be offended by anyone’s comments.

    What’s BGV? lol ……. the symbols?

    Yeah, i could run away with a guitar on vibrato in the middle section, but want to try something else first to add a bit more colour, but i might end up doing guitar, i also think it would fit good.

    I hear you on the morse code at the end, but i did it like that so that the song was finished, but the morse hung on a little longer, so that it sort of brought the beginning of the song/feeling back (and being lost/morse code etc etc……probably doesn’t make sense, but i know what i mean! lol

    Thanks again.

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