New song called Almost There

[Paul Gatt]

Here’s a song I did using EZDrummer. Hope you like it.

Any advice would be very much appreciated.

http://www.soundclick.com/paulgatt

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[ajxtjs]

Nice bright poppy sound. Try bringing in some vocal harmonies for the chorus – even just some oohs or something would fill it out. The lead vocal is maybe a little dry too? Good effort though!

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http://soundcloud.com/westonsupermaim

[Paul Gatt]

Cheers ajxtjs. You are so right about the harmonies, I can see they would help. Will sort out the vocals as well, a bit more reverb needed I think.They do sound too forward in the mix don’t they?

Thanks for your comments. Much appreciated.

[Scott]

I think this is a fun tune.
It’s different from what we are hearing here on the forum – and I dig it.
The levels could use a little change.
You might could try different mixes – one mix where you are showcasing the guitars,
one mix where you showcase the drums, one where you showcase the vocals.
For me – doing this gives me a good idea of where I want a mix to geaux.
just my 2¢
Thanks for sharing with us!
Take care

Scott

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