Well played and the drum programming does the job.
I like the tone of your voice. 🙂 Minor critique: You could perhaps consider varying the melody a little, and it would be really cool if you could push your voice to give some more ‘grit’ for the chorus! 🙂
Mixing sounds quite ok in my headphones, although I would perhaps have used less effects on your voice!
Good work, nice tune!
Now keep the above critique in mind when you listen to my latest effort – clearly I have no idea what I am talking about! 
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