Leech – “Ravenous” w/vox

[h8leech]

been awhile since ive posted a full song, did this track for a band im trying out for. tried to do a lil positive spin.. hope yall dig it, thanks for listening!
http://soundcloud.com/h8leech/leech-ravenous

Ravenous
its the error of our ways
the greed of men is the fall of man
shame, there’s no guilt in the selfish
the only ones that can live with themselves
rip the shirt off the backs of the helpless
your souless pockets, bottomless pits
rapacious minds
heaven has no room for you
avaricious hearts
heaven has no room for you
gluttonized souls
heaven has no room for you
voracity
heaven has no room for you
When you open your heart
only then can you change your ways
its never worth the greed
its only worth being loved
the damning vice of man
the need of substance to fill the empty void

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[ajxtjs]

Cool song man – the music sounds great. I think you need to work on your timing for the vox though, and maybe the phrasings too – they don’t seem to quite fit with the music, which detracts from it as a whole. I’d bring the vocals down in the mix too, they really dominate it at the moment. But there’s a lot of potential there if you nail the vocals. Good luck with it.

https://brownstratos.bandcamp.com/
http://soundcloud.com/westonsupermaim

[Scott]

I can dig it. Really good song.
The only thing I am kind of shy about , is the compression.
But I am a fan of the lower amounts of said effect.
With that said – really good work.
Thank you for sharing it with us!
Take care

Scott

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