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Hi All,
Here is a new song I wrote. I used the Pearl Kit from Superior Drummer 3 for the drum sounds. Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Hope you enjoy listening to it.
Dan
SD3, Logic x
Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac
I love the 70’s feel of the song. It almost has a Ramones type of feel to me. As I stated in a previous thread, if you don’t wish to read further, I’m okay with that.
I would pull the vocals back to sit in the mix and pull back the doubling so that it’s reinforcing the main vocals. In some parts, such as the verses, I would take the doubling out completely in order to allow certain parts of the song to make a point. I would also play a bit with the drum mix to add a bit more energy to the song, but not too much to overpower it. I would also take a bit of lo to lo-mids out of the guitar (they don’t need a lot of woof, and they sometimes can take away from the other instruments).
And as I also stated, don’t let what I said be a detraction. I liked what I heard so far.
jord
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Thanked by: Dan WilsonHi Jord,
Thanks for the advice/ suggestions. This is exactly the kind of feedback I am looking for. I look forward to trying each of your suggestions.
Dan
Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac
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